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Last week, you lost a luggage while traveling on holiday. Luckily you have travel insurance. Write a letter to the manager of the insurance company Describe the characteristic what you have lost Explain how you lost it Tell insurance company what you need from them

Dear Mr. Kamath, I am writing this letter to intimate and register a claim for the loss of my baggage while returning from Mumbai in the last week. Before, I began my journey from Delhi to Mumbai, I had taken a travel insurance from your company through the HDFC Bank with whom you have an ongoing partnership since 2005. I had opted a travel insurance from your company because of the best services and immediate claim settlement. I had visited to Mumbai for my business trip and I had few valuable item for which I had taken an insurance such as Laptop, Projector, Ipad, and my personal mobile. While leaving from the hotel I had kept my luggage in the Taxi. However, on the way there was sudden breakdown in Taxi and while changing the Taxi, driver had shifted the luggage to new taxi. When I reached to an airport, I realised my loss of luggage and immediately I had reported to the Police and got the FIR filed. My company is paying a regular premium to your company from the last 5 years. I am seeking a claim of about loss of my luggage. Herewith, I am attaching the invoice copy of all the loss items which was in the baggage and company account details. I would be grateful if you can immediately process the claim and let me know if you need further clarification which is obstructing the settlement process. Yours Sincerely, Bhavin Dalal
Dear Mr.
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Kamath
,

I am writing this letter to intimate and register a
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claim
for the
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loss
of my baggage while returning from Mumbai in the last week.
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Before
, I began my journey from Delhi to Mumbai, I had taken a travel insurance from your
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company
through the HDFC Bank with whom you have an ongoing partnership since 2005. I had opted a travel insurance from your
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company
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because
of the best services and immediate
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claim
settlement.

I had visited to Mumbai for my business trip and I had few valuable item for which I had taken an insurance such as Laptop, Projector,
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Ipad
, and my personal mobile.
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While
leaving from the hotel I had
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kept
my
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luggage
in the
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Taxi
.
However
, on the way there was sudden breakdown in
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Taxi
and while changing the
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Taxi
, driver had shifted the
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luggage
to new
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taxi
. When I reached to an airport, I
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realised
my
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loss
of
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luggage
and immediately I had reported to the Police and
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got
the FIR filed.

My
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company
is paying a regular premium to your
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company
from the last 5 years. I am seeking a
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claim
of about
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loss
of my
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luggage
. Herewith, I am attaching the invoice copy of all the
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loss
items which was in the baggage and
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company
account
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details
.

I would be grateful if you can immediately process the
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claim
and
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let
me know if you need
further
clarification which is obstructing the settlement process.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Bhavin
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Dalal
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IELTS letter Last week, you lost a luggage while traveling on holiday. Luckily you have travel insurance. Write a letter to the manager of the insurance company Describe the characteristic what you have lost Explain how you lost it Tell insurance company what you need from them

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  American English
7 paragraphs
245 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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