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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take 3OO5
Dear Jake, Hope you are doing well! I am writing in regards to your letter I received yesterday. First of all, I would like to apologize for the disturbance caused because of the loud noise. I totally understand that constant noise can be really annoying. I recently realized that there was a broken pipe in my kitchen sink due to which I was not able to get the clean drinking water. Now, I have to replace the whole structure to get it fixed which required welding and some electrical work. The plumber has been trying his best to fix it all from past few days and I suppose it will take another day or two. However, I can ask the person to work during your working hours when you are not at home to avoid the situation. Let me know if it is okay for him to work between 12: 30 to 2: 30 or you can suggest another time which is suitable for both of us. I look forward to receiving your response. Yours Sincerely
Dear Jake,

Hope you are doing well!

I am writing
in regards to
your letter I received yesterday.
First of all
, I would like to apologize for the disturbance caused
because
of the loud noise. I
totally
understand that constant noise can be
really
annoying. I recently realized that there was a broken pipe in my kitchen sink due to which I was not able to
get
the clean drinking water.
Now
, I
have to
replace the whole structure to
get
it
fixed
which required welding and
some
electrical work.

The plumber has been trying his best to
fix
it all from past few days and I suppose it will take another day or two.
However
, I can ask the person to work during your working hours when you are not at home to avoid the situation.
Let
me know if it is okay for him to work between 12: 30 to 2: 30 or you can suggest another time which is suitable for both of us.

I look forward to receiving your response.

Yours
Sincerely
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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