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You need to take leave from your work of over one month for personal reasons.

You need to take leave from your work of over one month for personal reasons. DpDE
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to request permission to take some leave during the coming one month. I am doing job in your company as software from six year. Now I have need some holiday because I have some health issue. I have problem in keen and doctor suggest me for surgery so during this period its impossible for me come at office. Doctor recommended me at least one year rest. I discuss this problem with my employer he is work same company with me he ready to take all my work responsibilities. during this holiday I tried to do work at home. I will touch with employer. I will check email daily so I can fulfill my work. I would grateful if you gave me one month leave. Your sincerely Jaspreet kaur
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to request permission to take
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some
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leave
during the coming one month. I am doing job in your
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company
as software from six year.
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Now
I have need
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some
holiday
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because
I have
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some
health issue. I have problem in keen and doctor suggest me for surgery
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so
during this period its impossible for me
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come
at office. Doctor recommended me at least one year rest. I discuss this problem with my employer he is
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work
same
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company
with me he ready to take all my
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work
responsibilities.
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during
this holiday I tried to do
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work
at home. I will touch with employer. I will
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check
email daily
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so
I can fulfill my
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work
.
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I
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would grateful
if you gave me one month
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leave
. Your
sincerely
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Jaspreet
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kaur

IELTS letter You need to take leave from your work of over one month for personal reasons.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
134 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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