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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take EJJb
Dear Mr. John, Thank you for bringing it to my attention that you have been disturbed with the ongoing repair work at my home. As you might have understood by now that there are some repair works going on to rectify the sewage and seepage leaks, and needed some drilling to be done, which were causing some exploding noises and I completely understand that you have been irritated by them and please accept my sincere apologies. Having said that this might continue for couple of more day, I know this sounds bad but this is the need of the hour for me to get that sorted as there is lot of unpleasant smell and might worsen later on. I would kindly request you to understand the current situation we are in and would get this sorted as soon as possible. I will make sure we get all the drilling work done on the same day and not to continue for couple of day, so that this wouldn't continue for long. Hope this helps you clarify on this and appreciate your patience on this. Apologies once again and sincere thanks. David.
Dear Mr. John,

Thank you for bringing it to my attention that you have
been disturbed
with the ongoing repair work at my home. As you might have understood by
now
that there are
some
repair works going on to rectify the sewage and seepage leaks, and needed
some
drilling to
be done
, which were causing
some
exploding noises and I completely understand that you have
been irritated
by them and
please
accept my sincere apologies.

Having said that this might continue for
couple of
more day, I know this sounds
bad
but
this is the need of the hour for me to
get
that sorted as there is
lot of
unpleasant smell and might worsen later on. I would kindly request you to understand the
current
situation we are in and would
get
this sorted as
soon
as possible.

I will
make
sure we
get
all the drilling work done on the same day and not to continue for
couple of
day,
so
that this wouldn't continue for long.

Hope this
helps
you clarify on this and appreciate your patience on this.

Apologies once again and sincere thanks.

David.
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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