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Although you are meant to present your thesis project in one month, your sister is getting married in Spain at the same time. You would like to change dates for your presentation. Write a letter to your professor. In your letter: Explain the situation Remind the professor of your academic achievements to date Ask for a different date to present your thesis.

Although you are meant to present your thesis project in one month, your sister is getting married in Spain at the same time. You would like to change dates for your presentation. Write a letter to your professor. In your letter: Explain the situation Remind the professor of your academic achievements to date Ask for a different date to present your thesis. YN0m

Dear professor Simmon, the objective of writing this letter is to let you know that it will be impossible for me to submit my thesis as per the curriculum deadline. let me explain my situation, I have to be part of my sisters wedding during the same time period. It will be difficult for me to finish it on time and present it. My sister is getting married in Spain so during that time me and my family will be there, More over making important arrangements for marriage like wedding venue and guest accommodations need my thorough focus there. It would be very hectic for me to focus on the arrangements as well as my thesis. As you already know that I am always use to complete my paper works and projects on time. I have always done immensely good in my department exams, more over part of research on cancer. I hope i will get some relaxation on time of submitting thesis. Lastly i would request you to let me submit my thesis around 10 days after I return back from the marriage. it will give me enough time to go through it and tie all the loose ends. it will help me to give my 100 percent in finishing this task. I awaits a favorable response from you. Thanking you for your consideration. Yours faithfully

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 a favorable response from you. Thanking you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully