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You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter Describe the problem Say how long it has been a problem Explain what action you would like the neighbour to take

Dear Mr Singh, I am writing to you to see what can be done about the loud noise coming from your flat. It seems that you are renovating your kitchen. In the evenings we hear a lot of banging, hammering and drilling. Thinking that the problem will be for one or two days only, I kept on ignoring the noise. But, more than 10 days have passed and the amount of noise is increasing day by day. The deafening sounds of hammers and drilling machines are spoiling our evenings. It has become almost impossible for me and my family to do anything in the evening. Kids have their exams in two weeks. Therefore, something must be done to solve this issue. I understand that your full-time work does not permit you to call the workers during the daytime. I would suggest that you contact a professional builder and take some days off from work. Certainly, an experienced person will be more efficient. Both I and my wife are working and our children are in their schools, so any noise between 8: 00 am and 4: 00 pm will not affect us. If you need any assistance in finding a professional builder, I can help you. Please feel free to call me on 0091 788989898. Hoping that you will take this suggestion into consideration. (221 Words) Regards, Lovely Singh
Dear Mr Singh,

I am writing to you to
see
what can
be done
about the loud
noise
coming from your flat. It seems that you are renovating your kitchen.

In the evenings we hear
a lot of
banging, hammering and drilling. Thinking that the problem will be for one or two days
only
, I
kept
on ignoring the
noise
.
But
, more than 10 days have passed and the amount of
noise
is increasing day by day. The deafening sounds of hammers and drilling machines are spoiling our evenings. It has become almost impossible for me and my family to do anything in the evening. Kids have their exams in two weeks.
Therefore
, something
must
be done
to solve this issue.

I understand that your full-time work does not permit you to call the workers during the daytime. I would suggest that you contact a professional builder and take
some
days off from work.
Certainly
, an experienced person will be more efficient. Both I and my wife are working and our children are in their schools,
so
any
noise
between 8: 00 am and 4: 00 pm will not affect us.

If you need any assistance in finding a professional builder, I can
help
you.
Please
feel free to call me on 0091 788989898.

Hoping that you will take this suggestion into consideration. (221 Words)

Regards,

Lovely Singh
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IELTS letter You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter Describe the problem Say how long it has been a problem Explain what action you would like the neighbour to take

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
227 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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