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Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, pmAm
Dear Mr. Editor, I am writing in relation to a felicitation ceremony that your prestigious firm would be organizing next month. I would like to suggest Mr. Johnathon Moore's name as a prime candidate for the award list. Let me explain it in more detail. He has been serving the community for 12 years. Recently, he organized a campaign to discourage our reliance on fossils fuels in order to curb environmental pollution. You would be delighted to know that he has been named amongst the most influential people in 2020. To protect the exploitation of animals, he has filed a signed petition. This would ensure equal rights to animals. Would you be able to acknowledge his contribution by presenting him with a space in your weekly press release? This would allow him to keep inspiring people and he will remain in constant touch with society. In anticipation of a positive revert. Yours sincerely, Damanpreet Singh
Dear Mr. Editor,

I am writing in relation to a felicitation ceremony that your prestigious firm would be organizing
next
month. I would like to suggest Mr. Johnathon Moore's name as a prime candidate for the award list.

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Let
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
it in more detail. He has been serving the community for 12 years. Recently, he organized a campaign to discourage our reliance on fossils fuels in order to curb environmental pollution. You would
be delighted
to know that he has
been named
amongst the most influential
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in 2020. To protect the exploitation of animals, he has filed a signed petition. This would ensure equal rights to animals.

Would you be able to acknowledge his contribution by presenting him with a space in your weekly press release? This would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
him to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
inspiring
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
people and
he will remain in constant touch with society.

In anticipation of a
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positive
revert.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Damanpreet
Singh
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IELTS letter Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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154 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
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