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Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, pmAm

Dear Mr. Editor, I am writing in relation to a felicitation ceremony that your prestigious firm would be organizing next month. I would like to suggest Mr. Johnathon Moore's name as a prime candidate for the award list. Let me explain it in more detail. He has been serving the community for 12 years. Recently, he organized a campaign to discourage our reliance on fossils fuels in order to curb environmental pollution. You would be delighted to know that he has been named amongst the most influential people in 2020. To protect the exploitation of animals, he has filed a signed petition. This would ensure equal rights to animals. Would you be able to acknowledge his contribution by presenting him with a space in your weekly press release? This would allow him to keep inspiring people and he will remain in constant touch with society. In anticipation of a positive revert. Yours sincerely, Damanpreet Singh

Dear Mr. Editor,

I am writing in relation to a felicitation ceremony that your prestigious firm would be organizing next
 month. I would like to suggest Mr. Johnathon Moore's name as a prime candidate for the award list.

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 in 2020. To protect the exploitation of animals, he has filed a signed petition. This would ensure equal rights to animals.

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allow
 him to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
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 he will remain in constant touch with society.

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Yours sincerely
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IELTS letter Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

154 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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