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Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were 10rX
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to report a loss of my hand bag in your flight which I boarded recently. I travelled from London Heathrow Airport to Vancouver Airport on 20th December 2020 in Air Canada whose flight number was XS032. Having arrived at Vancouver by 10: 30 PM and while boarding a taxi to my apartment, I discovered that I left my handbag under my flight seat. My handbag is slim, dark-grey colored with pink patches on either sides. It is made of pure leather with two compartments in it. I remember it had a keychain with the name "Dolly" printed on it. In one of the compartments, I had a yellow purse with cash of nearly 150 Canadian Dollars, couple of credit cards, one is VISA and the other is Maestro. There was also some emergency medications and a duplicate copy of my ticket. Having said the specifications, I expect your kind attention in identifying my lost handbag at your earliest convenience. Yours Faithfully, Sriram Praveen S
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to report a loss of my hand bag in your flight which I boarded recently.

I travelled from London Heathrow Airport to Vancouver Airport on 20th December 2020 in Air Canada whose flight number was XS032. Having arrived at Vancouver by 10: 30 PM and while boarding a taxi to my apartment, I discovered that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
my handbag under my flight seat.

My handbag is slim,
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dark-grey
colored with pink patches on either sides. It
is made
of pure leather with two compartments in it. I remember it had a
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keychain
with the name
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"
Dolly
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
printed on it.

In one of the compartments, I had a yellow purse with cash of
nearly
150 Canadian Dollars,
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couple of
credit cards, one is VISA and the other is Maestro. There was
also
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some
emergency medications and a duplicate copy of my ticket.

Having said the specifications, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
your kind attention in identifying my lost handbag at your earliest convenience.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Sriram Praveen S
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IELTS letter Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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