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ou’re applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: *Give details of the job *Explain why it is important to you *Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference.

ou’re applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: *Give details of the job *Explain why it is important to you *Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference. NDWg
Dear Ms. Brown I’m writing this letter to know if you could write me a reference letter. My name is Udyan Luthra and I was a student in your Accounting class in Georgian College on Tuesday’s from 3: 00PM to 6: 00PM. I just got the second interview with the General Manager of the John’s Accounting Firm located in Bracebridge, Ontario working as a Accountant in their company. I’d be grateful if you could write me a reference letter which would play as an important role in getting this job. Since accounting was one of the main subjects of my course so it would be very helpful. The scores I received in my program were 93% in Semester 1, followed by 96% in Semester 2 and 3 and 89% in Semester 4. Having a reference letter could give me an additional bonus to be selected as an accountant for their company. I would really appreciate if the reference letter could include my performance in the class, my punctuality, my participation in group activities and the class presentations and the last my skills in the subject. This would be a great help for me. Thanks for taking out time to read my letter. Waiting for your positive reply. Your’s Sincerely Udyan Luthra
Dear Ms. Brown

I’m writing this
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to know if you could write me a
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reference
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letter
. My name is
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Udyan
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Luthra and
I was a student in your Accounting
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class
in Georgian College on Tuesday’s from 3: 00PM to 6: 00PM. I
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just
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got
the second interview with the General Manager of the John’s Accounting Firm located in
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Bracebridge
, Ontario working as
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a
Accountant in their
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company
.

I’d be grateful if you could write me a
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reference
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letter
which would play as an
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important
role in getting this job. Since accounting was one of the main subjects of my course
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so
it would be
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very
helpful. The scores I received in my program were 93% in Semester 1, followed by 96% in Semester 2 and 3 and 89% in Semester 4. Having a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reference
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
letter
could give me an additional bonus to
be selected
as an accountant for their
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company
. I would
really
appreciate if the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reference
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
letter
could include my performance in the
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class
, my punctuality, my participation in group activities and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
presentations and the last my
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skills
in the subject.

This would be a great
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help
for me. Thanks for taking out time to read my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
letter
. Waiting for your
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positive
reply.

Did you mean "Your" or "Yours"?
Your’s
Sincerely


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IELTS letter ou’re applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: *Give details of the job *Explain why it is important to you *Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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