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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. give contact details for when you are away 2. give instructions about how to care for your pet 3. describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. give contact details for when you are away 2. give instructions about how to care for your pet 3. describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . , GMJle
Dear Chris, It's great to hear from you after such a long time. I'm glad to know that you agreed to take care of my dog and house in my absence for the next week. I can be reached directly on my mobile number as my vacation is within the UK. It's better to contact the vet clinic for any medical emergency on their phone number which you can find on a notepaper on the fridge. Currently, my dog is following a specific diet so feed him 300 grams only everyday in the morning from the food box near the entrance door. In the afternoon, take him for a 20 minutes walk and make sure you take plastic bag with you to clean after him. Nevertheless, it would be great if you can wash the dishes because they might smell if they stay in the sink for a long time. Additionally, few shirts need ironing as I'll need them upon my return back since I've to attend a meeting early morning the next day. Thank you for your help. Best Regards, Alex
Dear Chris,

It's great to hear from you after such a long time. I'm glad to know that you
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agreed
to take care of my dog and
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house
in my absence for the
next
week. I can
be reached
directly
on my mobile number as my vacation is within the UK. It's better to contact the vet clinic for any medical emergency on their phone number which you can find on a notepaper on the fridge.

Currently
, my dog is following a specific diet
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so
feed him 300 grams
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only
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
everyday
in the morning from the food box near the entrance door. In the afternoon, take him for a 20 minutes walk and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure you take plastic bag with you to clean after him.

Nevertheless
, it would be great if you can wash the dishes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they might smell if they stay in the sink for a long time.
Additionally
, few shirts need ironing as I'll need them upon my
Consider using "return".
return back
since I've to attend a meeting early morning the
next
day.

Thank you for your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.

Best Regards,

Alex

IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. give contact details for when you are away 2. give instructions about how to care for your pet 3. describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ,

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  American English
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181 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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