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Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend, Write a letter to him/her and say

Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend, Write a letter to him/her and say wBM0e
Dear Sonia, It was great to hear from you after such a long time. I would love to have Gia and Taney over for the weekend. You know how much I love children. I am looking forward to having a splendid time with them. These days I am on morning shift, so you can drop both of them any time after 2 pm. Let me know their favourite dishes, so that I can prepare them in advance, and then spend all the time with them. I have planned many things for them. Friday evening will be movie time. There is a very nice animation movie 'pete's Dargon', which they would love. On Saturday, I will take them to Hard's world, which is famous fun park, where there are many rides for children. I am sure they will enjoy too. On Saturday morning I will take them to a mini zoo, which is in Chennai. Hoping to see them soon. Yours lovingly, Bhuviii
Dear Sonia,

It was great to hear from you after such a long
time
. I would
love
to have
Gia
and Taney over for the weekend. You know how much I
love
children. I am looking forward to having a splendid
time
with them.

These days I am on morning shift,
so
you can drop both of them any
time
after 2 pm.
Let
me know their
favourite
dishes,
so
that I can prepare them in advance, and then spend all the
time
with them.

I have planned
many
things for them. Friday evening will be movie
time
. There is a
very
nice animation movie '
pete
's
Dargon
', which they would
love
. On Saturday, I will take them to
Hard
's world, which is
famous
fun park, where there are
many
rides for children. I am sure they will enjoy too. On Saturday morning I will take them to a mini zoo, which is in Chennai.

Hoping to
see
them
soon
.

Yours
lovingly
,

Bhuviii
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IELTS letter Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend, Write a letter to him/her and say

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161 words
5.5
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