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Your friend is moving to a new house and wants your help. •say why you are free •how you can help •ask questions about the new house

Your friend is moving to a new house and wants your help. •say why you are free •how you can help •ask questions about the new house LqOWr
Dear Mary I am writing with regard to know your a new house. I heard through John that you are migrating to a new house near Istanbul city as soon as, may be this coming week. I hope that you will move to a new home without any difficulties as well as we visit to help you to your apartment as soon as possible. Actually, I have moved my new apartment in Bursa recently. In addition, in my university, it is announced holiday, soon, Rosa, John and I will go to your house in order to decorate your house with a lot beautiful ornaments. Do not worry about meal because rosa promised to cook a particularly good meal. Furthermore, I interested in your new apartment and send me your house location and write about room from e-mail please. I hope that we will meet this coming week and do not forget to send your location, see you soon Your sincerely Jenny
Dear Mary

I am writing with regard to know your a
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. I heard through John that you are migrating to a
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new
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house
near Istanbul city as
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soon
as, may be this coming week.
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I
hope that you will
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move
to a
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new
home without any difficulties
as well
as we visit to
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help
you to your apartment as
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soon
as possible.

Actually, I have
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moved
my
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new
apartment in Bursa recently.
In addition
, in my university, it
is announced
holiday,
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soon
, Rosa, John and I will go to your
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house
in order to decorate your
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house
with a
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lot
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beautiful
ornaments. Do not worry about meal
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because
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rosa
promised to cook a
particularly
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good
meal.

Furthermore
, I interested in your
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new
apartment and
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send
me your
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house
location and write about room from e-mail
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please
. I hope that we will
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meet
this coming week and do not forget to
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send
your location,
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see
you
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
soon


Your
sincerely


Jenny

IELTS letter Your friend is moving to a new house and wants your help. •say why you are free •how you can help •ask questions about the new house

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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