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Your friend is considering quitting his job to start his own restaurant. Write to him offering him some advice. You can choose if you think he should set up his own restaurant, or if he should stay at his current job, but explain why

Your friend is considering quitting his job to start his own restaurant. Write to him offering him some advice. You can choose if you think he should set up his own restaurant, or if he should stay at his current job, but explain why 3WbR5

Dear Nikolay, I’m glad to hear you. I have read all your letter three times and should say that you should start create your two years dream. You are dreaming about self restaurant two years. Mate we will support you and thanks that my opinion is important for you. By the way, eight weeks ago in football bar we told about your problems at current job and you already told me about your thinking of quit. Actually, you spent 3 years of your life on this work, but still dreaming about new Italy restaurant. We have only one life and must do what we want. Additionally, you don’t have a children. It is meaning that you don’t must earn a lot of money first time to support them. You have all chances to build a successful Italian restaurant. I’m looking forward to hearing from you my friend. Sorry for the delay, I hope my response is not late. You must know that I will support all your decisions and hope that you will make right choice. Best wishes Dmitry

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Nikolay
,

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start
 create your two years dream. You are dreaming about self restaurant two years. Mate we will support you and thanks that my opinion is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 for you.

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told
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current
 job and you already This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me about your thinking of quit. Actually, you spent 3 years of your life on this work, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
still
 dreaming about new Italy restaurant. We have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one life and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 do what we want. Additionally
, you don’t have Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a child" or simply "children"?a childchildren
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is meaning
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must
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a lot of
 money first
 time to support them. You have all chances to build a successful Italian restaurant.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you my friend. Sorry for the delay, I hope my response is not late. You This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 know that I will support all your decisions and hope that you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 right choice.

Best wishes

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Dmitry