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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take MedQ
Dear neighbours, I am writing this letter in response to the complaint of noise coming from my flat. The noise coming from my apartment is the internal work being done in my home. Actually, I am renovating my home consequently, there is the noise of some wooden and tiling work being done at my apartment. I am extremely feeling sorry for the inconvenience raised by me. I did not intended to bother anybody. I have taken few actions to resolve this problem. I have asked the workers to do the noisy work during 9 am to 2 pm when everybody goes to their offices and schools and finish the work before children come to back home from their schools so they do not feel any disturbance while they study at home. I hope you forgive me for the inconvenience raised by me. Thanks, John
Dear
Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.
neighbours
,

I am writing this letter in response to the complaint of noise coming from my flat.

The noise coming from my apartment is the internal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
being done
in my home. Actually, I am renovating my home
consequently
, there is the noise of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
wooden and tiling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
being done
at my apartment. I am
extremely
feeling sorry for the inconvenience raised by me. I did not
After the auxiliary verb 'do', use the base form of a verb. Did you mean "intend"?
intended
to bother anybody.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have taken few actions to resolve this problem.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have asked the workers to do the noisy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
during 9 am to 2 pm when everybody goes to their offices and schools and finish the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
children
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to back home from their schools
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
they do not feel any disturbance while they study at home.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you forgive me for the inconvenience raised by me.

Thanks,

John

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
143 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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