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Your friend invited you to his/her birthday party, but you are unable to attend. Write a letter apol...

Your friend invited you to his/her birthday party, but you are unable to attend. Write a letter apol. . . Mlg7a
Dear Navu, How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you in vibrant and good health. I am writing this letter to you for apologizing for being not able to attend your birthday party. Firstly, I'm really apologize to you for unable to attend your birthday party. On that day there is a medical emergency occurred in my family. My paternal uncle fell from the stairs. Thus, We had to rush to the hospital and I ought to stay there with my uncle till the operation. All this happened so sudden that I didn't have abundance time to inform you. Being a elder daughter in my family the whole responsibility was on my shoulder. I still feel guilty that on this special day we were not together. However, I have my plans to celebrate your birthday. Let me know whenever you have free from your hectic schedule so that we can celebrate together. I'm really excited to see you soon. With Love, Lavu.
Dear
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Navu
,

How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you in vibrant and
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good
health. I am writing this letter to you for apologizing for being not able to attend your birthday party.

Firstly
, I'm
really
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apologize
to you for unable to attend your birthday party. On that day there is a medical emergency occurred in my family. My paternal uncle fell from the stairs.
Thus
, We had to rush to the hospital and I ought to stay there with my uncle till the operation. All this happened
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so
sudden that I didn't have abundance time to inform you. Being
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a
elder daughter in my family the whole responsibility was on my shoulder.

I
still
feel guilty that on this special day we were not together.
However
, I have my plans to celebrate your birthday.
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Let
me know whenever you have free from your hectic schedule
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so
that we can celebrate together.

I'm
really
excited to
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see
you
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soon
.

With
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Love
,

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Lavu
.
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IELTS letter Your friend invited you to his/her birthday party, but you are unable to attend. Write a letter apol. . .

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164 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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