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I've worked on my summer holiday and earned good amount but the problem is I've no idea how to spend it. Can you suggest me something? How do you usually earn money and how do you spend them? Write back soon! Bye.

I've worked on my summer holiday and earned good amount but the problem is I've no idea how to spend it. Can you suggest me something? How do you usually earn money and how do you spend them? Write back soon! Bye. ORowk
Dear Dan Thanks for your letter. I was sorry to hear that you have a problem how to spent your earned money. I have a couple of ideas which I hope these will help you. Firstly, you should make a list of all doing works. You don't spend your money on buying different unnecessary things. You use it helpful items for yours. For example, denote people who are unable, need for help a half of your money. Secondly, a rest of your money you should invest variety new projects as you like. Both of them come back to you unexpected happiness. Well, I must go now because I have my own housework to do! I hope these ideas help you. Write or give me a call if there is anything else I can do. Best wishes, John.
Dear Dan Thanks for your letter. I was sorry to hear that you have a problem how to spent your earned
money
. I have a couple of
ideas
which I hope these will
help
you.
Firstly
, you should
make
a list of all doing works. You don't spend your
money
on buying
different
unnecessary things. You
use
it helpful items for yours.
For example
, denote
people
who are unable, need for
help
a half of your
money
.
Secondly
, a rest of your
money
you should invest variety new projects as you like. Both of them
come
back to you unexpected happiness. Well, I
must
go
now
because
I have my
own
housework to do! I hope these
ideas
help
you. Write or give me a call if there is anything else I can do. Best wishes, John.
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IELTS letter I've worked on my summer holiday and earned good amount but the problem is I've no idea how to spend it. Can you suggest me something? How do you usually earn money and how do you spend them? Write back soon! Bye.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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