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Are you feeling good after the mid-term test? I bet that you have the highest score because you are the best student in our old class. You knew that I am a big fan of Ha Anh Tuan, right? And when I heard that he would have a concert at Da Lat, I bough a ticket and came there.

Are you feeling good after the mid-term test? I bet that you have the highest score because you are the best student in our old class. You knew that I am a big fan of Ha Anh Tuan, right? And when I heard that he would have a concert at Da Lat, I bough a ticket and came there. VwG0A
Hi Raven, Are you feeling good after the mid-term test? I bet that you have the highest score because you are the best student in our old class. You knew that I am a big fan of Ha Anh Tuan, right? And when I heard that he would have a concert at Da Lat, I bough a ticket and came there. When I saw the poster, I was really surprised because the concert the just take 5 hours to go to Da Lat from my house. And I decided to go there when I saw the date is just 2 days after my birthday. And when I came to the concert, I was very excited because the concert was more than I expected. The concert designed based on the gramophone. That made me felt like I was in the best concert ever. After the concert, I felt very happy and interesting. I think this was my best birthday I ever had. Now, I still feel excited when I think about that. I hope that I can come to his concert again soon. And if you want to go with me, you can text me and I will buy you a ticket. See you soon, Tri
Hi Raven,

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, right? And when I heard that he would have a
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at
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bough
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Lat from my
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2 days after my birthday.

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. The
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designed based on the gramophone. That made me felt like I was in the best
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ever.

After the
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, I felt
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happy and interesting. I
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this was my best birthday I ever had.
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IELTS letter Are you feeling good after the mid-term test? I bet that you have the highest score because you are the best student in our old class. You knew that I am a big fan of Ha Anh Tuan, right? And when I heard that he would have a concert at Da Lat, I bough a ticket and came there.

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