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Invite your friends to your birthday party

Invite your friends to your birthday party RR90W
Dear Mr John. I am writing to invite you for my birthday party. It will be celebrated onNovember 22 at 6 p. m at the Istanbul restaurant. Firstly, I am planning a great party. I have invited all my close friends, parents and neighbours. I will celebrate my 31st birthday. There are so many good things in this day. For example: dance, sing, shou. My favorite singer Selena Gomez is going to sing a special song for me. Secondly, This restaurant's meals are very delicious. My parents will bring marvelous birthday cake. There are children's corners in this store. You may come with your family. In addition, I am going to give some present for guests. You will be able to get present. I am so glad if you come this party. This restaurant is situated opposite the National Park. Yours sincerely, Lucy.
Dear Mr John. I am writing to invite you for my birthday party. It will
be celebrated
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onNovember
22 at 6 p. m at the Istanbul restaurant.
Firstly
, I am planning a great party. I have invited all my close friends, parents and
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neighbours
. I will celebrate my 31st birthday. There are
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so
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many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
things in this day.
For example
: dance, sing,
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shou
. My favorite singer Selena Gomez is going to sing a special song for me.
Secondly
, This restaurant's meals are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
delicious. My parents will bring marvelous birthday cake. There are children's corners in this store. You may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
with your family.
In addition
, I am going to give
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
present for guests. You will be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
present. I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
glad if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
this party. This restaurant
is situated
opposite the National Park. Yours
sincerely
, Lucy.
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IELTS letter Invite your friends to your birthday party

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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