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You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for residents. Write a letter to a councillor. • Introduce yourself. • Describe the problem. • Say what you think the council should do about the situation.

You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for residents. Write a letter to a councillor. • Introduce yourself. • Describe the problem. • Say what you think the council should do about the situation. 5o2m
Dear Sir or Madam, I am Don Daggle, a resident of Marina Bay, London, and a doctor by profession. I have been living in this neighborhood for last 4 years. I am writing this letter to express an opposing view of the new policy that was announced by the council last week. Residents are already suffering from high parking fees during the weekdays which are under peak days category. On the other hand, the council announced that the weekends will be included as well in the peak days category starting from next month that will lead to extra parking cost for residents. I would appreciate it if you could withdraw this announcement prior its effective due date. This request is in favor for all the area due to the fact that every single family owns its private vehicle. I look to forward hearing from you on the news announcement. Yours faithfully, Don Daggle
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Don
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Daggle
, a resident of Marina Bay, London, and a doctor by profession. I have been living in this neighborhood for last 4 years.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am writing this letter to express an opposing view of the new policy that
was announced
by the council last week.

Residents are already suffering from high parking fees during the weekdays which are under peak
Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean "days'" or "day's"?
days
category.
On the other hand
, the council announced that the weekends will
be included
as well
in the peak
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "days'" or "day's"?
days
category starting from
next
month that will lead to extra parking cost for residents.

I would appreciate it if you could withdraw this announcement prior its effective due date. This request is in favor for all the area due to the fact that every single family
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
owns
its private vehicle.

I look to forward hearing from you on the news announcement.

Yours
faithfully
,

Don
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Daggle
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IELTS letter You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for residents. Write a letter to a councillor. • Introduce yourself. • Describe the problem. • Say what you think the council should do about the situation.

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