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Complaint letter for defective camera

Complaint letter for defective camera Xx9E
Dear Sir/Madam I would like to introduce myself as one of your most loyal customers. My name is Safeena Lakdawala and have been using your products for over a decade. I am a professional photographer and am mainly involved with new born baby photoshoots. I have always had an excellent experience with your superior products, as well as prompt after sales service. However, the last two weeks have been extremely disappointing. I had purchased the highly recommended A76 Hi-Pro 2021 professional camera on the 2nd of February 2021. When I first used the camera, I noticed that it distorted closeup images and there was a defect in its optical zoom. I immediately returned it back to the dealer for repairs. I was assured that I would receive a new or repaired camera within the week. After numerous phone calls and personal visits to the store, I am still to receive my camera. I have been unable to use it for the important photoshoot as planned and even if I get it back now, it is of no use to me. I am unwilling to wait indefinitely for the camera and request you to issue an immediate refund. I will be visiting the store on the 21st of February 2021 and I expect that the refund will have been processed by then. Yours sincerely Safeena Lakdawala
Dear Sir/Madam

I would like to introduce myself as one of your most loyal customers. My name is
Safeena
Lakdawala
and have been using your products for over a decade. I am a professional photographer and am
mainly
involved with new born baby
photoshoots
. I have always had an excellent experience with your superior products,
as well
as prompt after sales service.

However
, the last two weeks have been
extremely
disappointing. I had
purchased
the
highly
recommended A76 Hi-Pro 2021 professional
camera
on the 2nd of February 2021. When I
first
used
the
camera
, I noticed that it distorted closeup images and there was a defect in its optical zoom. I immediately returned it back to the dealer for repairs. I
was assured
that I would receive a new or repaired
camera
within the week. After numerous phone calls and personal visits to the store, I am
still
to receive my
camera
. I have been unable to
use
it for the
important
photoshoot
as planned and even if I
get
it back
now
, it is of no
use
to me.

I am unwilling to wait
indefinitely
for the
camera
and request you to issue an immediate refund.
I
will be visiting the store on the 21st of February 2021 and I
expect
that the refund will have
been processed
by then.

Yours
sincerely


Safeena
Lakdawala
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IELTS letter Complaint letter for defective camera

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
224 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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