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Write a letter to hostel warden complaining about your current living conditions

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with my current living conditions. While the accommodation is very nice, my roommate has made it extremely difficult for me to work and co-exists with him. I am sincerely hoping that you will be considerate once I explain my situation to you. Let me explain my situation. Trouble started about 4 months ago when my roommate first moved in. Prior to that, everything was fine; my old roommate was very nice and adjustable to live with. My current roommate, however, is a chain smoker and he fills up the room with smoke. This situation, on one hand is a health hazard, is impacting my work schedules since it impossible to stay in the room and continue work. Would you kindly relocate me or my roommate to a different room? I would rather prefer to live with someone who a non-smoker and is more attentive to others concerns. I hope you can understand my situation. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Abhinav
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to
let
you know that I am unhappy with my
current
living conditions.

While the accommodation is
very
nice, my
roommate
has made it
extremely
difficult for me to work and co-exists with him. I am
sincerely
hoping that you will be considerate once I
explain
my situation to you.

Let
me
explain
my situation. Trouble
started
about 4 months ago when my
roommate
first
moved
in. Prior to that, everything was fine; my
old
roommate
was
very
nice and adjustable to
live
with. My
current
roommate
,
however
, is a chain
smoker and
he fills up the room with smoke. This situation, on one hand is a health hazard, is impacting my work schedules since it impossible to stay in the room and continue work.

Would you kindly relocate me or my
roommate
to a
different
room? I would
rather
prefer to
live
with someone who a non-smoker and is more attentive to others concerns. I hope you can understand my situation.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Abhinav
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IELTS letter Write a letter to hostel warden complaining about your current living conditions

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
176 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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