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Write a letter to hostel warden complaining about your current living conditions

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with my current living conditions. While the accommodation is very nice, my roommate has made it extremely difficult for me to work and co-exists with him. I am sincerely hoping that you will be considerate once I explain my situation to you. Let me explain my situation. Trouble started about 4 months ago when my roommate first moved in. Prior to that, everything was fine; my old roommate was very nice and adjustable to live with. My current roommate, however, is a chain smoker and he fills up the room with smoke. This situation, on one hand is a health hazard, is impacting my work schedules since it impossible to stay in the room and continue work. Would you kindly relocate me or my roommate to a different room? I would rather prefer to live with someone who a non-smoker and is more attentive to others concerns. I hope you can understand my situation. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Abhinav
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to
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let
you know that I am unhappy with my
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current
living conditions.

While the accommodation is
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very
nice, my
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roommate
has made it
extremely
difficult for me to work and co-exists with him. I am
sincerely
hoping that you will be considerate once I
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explain
my situation to you.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation. Trouble
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started
about 4 months ago when my
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roommate
first
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moved
in. Prior to that, everything was fine; my
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old
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roommate
was
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very
nice and adjustable to
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live
with. My
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current
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roommate
,
however
, is a chain
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smoker and
he fills up the room with smoke. This situation, on one hand is a health hazard, is impacting my work schedules since it impossible to stay in the room and continue work.

Would you kindly relocate me or my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roommate
to a
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different
room? I would
rather
prefer to
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live
with someone who a non-smoker and is more attentive to others concerns. I hope you can understand my situation.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Abhinav

IELTS letter Write a letter to hostel warden complaining about your current living conditions

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  American English
8 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
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