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Dear Mr Micheal I am writing to apologize for the meeting I missed on yesterday about strategic plan for the company.

Dear Mr Micheal I am writing to apologize for the meeting I missed on yesterday about strategic plan for the company. k3dW
Dear Mr Micheal I am writing to apologize for the meeting I missed on yesterday about strategic plan for the company. I am well aware how important this meeting is and the necessity of my presence to validate key assumptions related to revenue growth of the company. I was well prepared for the meeting and in fact, I managed to come up with a presentation slides to go through with other stakeholders. But, due to inevitable reason I could not attend the meeting and I am very sorry for that. As usual, I left the home at 8. 00 am and drew straight away to the corporate office. But, on my way, I met with an accident. Though, there was no major damage to the vehicle of the both parties, it took almost six hours to get clear off from necessary documentations related to Insurance and others. You can image how exhausted I would be afterwards, hence I returned home. But, I ensured my colleague is attending the meeting on my behalf. Tomorrow, my main priority is to call for a meeting with my team and I will go through all the points discussed. Subsequently, I will send an email to the team clarifying points that are not clear. By this way, I will make sure that all the members are on the track and have same understanding as how to move forward. I hope you will forgive my absence and be assured of my commitments to this company and its future. Yours sincerely, Peter
Dear Mr Micheal

I am writing to apologize for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
I missed on yesterday about strategic plan for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

I am well aware how
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
is and the necessity of my presence to validate key assumptions related to revenue growth of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.
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I
was
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well prepared
for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
and in fact, I managed to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
up with a presentation slides to go through with other stakeholders.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, due to inevitable reason I could not attend the
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
meeting and
I am
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very
sorry for that.

As usual, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
the home at 8. 00 am and drew straight away to the corporate office.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, on my way, I met with an accident. Though, there was no major damage to the vehicle of the both parties, it took almost six hours to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
off from necessary documentations related to Insurance
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and others
. You can image how exhausted I would be afterwards,
hence
I returned home.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, I ensured my colleague is attending the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
on my behalf.

Tomorrow, my main priority is to call for a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
with my team and I will go through all the points discussed.
Subsequently
, I will
Consider using "email".
send an email to
the team clarifying points that are not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
. By this way, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that all the members are on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
and have same understanding as how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
forward.

I hope you will forgive my absence and
be assured
of my commitments to this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and its future.

Yours
sincerely
,

Peter
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IELTS letter Dear Mr Micheal I am writing to apologize for the meeting I missed on yesterday about strategic plan for the company.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
254 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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