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Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain Why you are writing to them Why you think the insurance should not be increased What you want them to do

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing toy you in regarding of the recent increase in the monthly fees of the car insurance and in order to inform you that hearing this news making me not happy, My name is Mostafa Ibrahim, my car is Fiat made 2002 and my insurance card number is 332856485, It had been in the insurance with your company for the last 10 years and this is the 4th time in the last 2 years that the insurance fees to be increased. As mentioned before that this is not the first time the insurance fees to be increased, but also the increase does not have any advantages to me as a car owner, the coverage of the insurance is still the same, By comparing to the market, now the fees became higher than the average for the same car model and year built. I would like to ask you for an appointment to discuss, review this increase and to increase the insurance benefits for my car, Like full coverage to the car in accidents by others instead of the 10 percent co-payment the customer pay. Looking forward for your kind reply. Yours faithfully Mostafa
Dear Sir/Madam,

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and in order to inform you that hearing this news making me not happy, My name is
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card number is 332856485, It had been in the
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with your
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for the last 10 years and this is the 4th time in the last 2 years that the
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owner, the coverage of the
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insurance
is
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now
the
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fees
became higher than the average for the same
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car
model and year built.

I would like to ask you for an appointment to discuss, review this
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and to
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increase
the
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benefits for my
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car
, Like full coverage to the
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car
in accidents by others
instead
of the 10 percent co-payment the customer pay.

Looking forward for your kind reply.

Yours
faithfully


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IELTS letter Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain Why you are writing to them Why you think the insurance should not be increased What you want them to do

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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