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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.

Dear Sir or Madam i am writing to complain about my college room where i am staying. im telling you the details about the problem i have facing now firstly i shared my room with someone who is also student from our college. as we are staying in a small room there are not enough space left for working. however now i am working on a assignment which is very important for my study. in our room there are merely a table which not enough for both. though my room partner is a decent person but he is making noise while i work. as a result i can not concentrate on my study properly. i badly need a large room so that i can work peacefully. so i am requesting you to provide me a larger room immediately i would appreciate your immediate attention to this matter your faithfully Rezwanul Hoque

Dear Sir or Madam

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 am writing to complain about my college You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
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 telling you the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
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firstly
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 shared my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 with someone who is also
 student from our college. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.As
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small
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room
 there are not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 space This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
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however
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 am working on Use “an” instead of ‘a’ if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘an article’, ‘an hour’.an
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very
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important
 for my study. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.In
in
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room
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 a table which not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 for both. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Though
though
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room
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but
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 work. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.As
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 a result Did you mean “I”?I
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 can not concentrate on my study properly
.

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badly
 need a large You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
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so
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 can work peacefully
.

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so
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i
 am requesting you to provide me a larger You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 immediately

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i
 would appreciate your immediate attention to this matter

your faithfully


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Rezwanul
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Hoque