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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.

Dear Sir or Madam i am writing to complain about my college room where i am staying. im telling you the details about the problem i have facing now firstly i shared my room with someone who is also student from our college. as we are staying in a small room there are not enough space left for working. however now i am working on a assignment which is very important for my study. in our room there are merely a table which not enough for both. though my room partner is a decent person but he is making noise while i work. as a result i can not concentrate on my study properly. i badly need a large room so that i can work peacefully. so i am requesting you to provide me a larger room immediately i would appreciate your immediate attention to this matter your faithfully Rezwanul Hoque
Dear Sir or Madam

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i
am writing to complain about my college
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room
where
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i
am staying.
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im
telling you the
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details
about the problem
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i
have facing
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now


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firstly
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i
shared my
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room
with someone who is
also
student from our college.
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as
we are staying in a
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small
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room
there are not
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enough
space
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left
for working.
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however
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now
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i
am working on
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a
assignment which is
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very
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important
for my study.
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in
our
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room
there are
merely
a table which not
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enough
for both.
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though
my
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room
partner is a decent person
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but
he is making noise while
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i
work.
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as
a result
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i
can not concentrate on my study
properly
.

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i
badly
need a large
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room
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so
that
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i
can work
peacefully
.

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so
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i
am requesting you to provide me a larger
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room
immediately

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i
would appreciate your immediate attention to this matter

your
faithfully


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Rezwanul
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Hoque

IELTS letter You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
150 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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