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a place you want to go in the future

a place you want to go in the future L39WR
Ever since I was a little girl, I have dreamed of traveling and discovering beautiful places. In the future, when there is no financial pressure, I think I will reward myself with a visit to Switzerland. It can be said that Switzerland is as beautiful as a fairy-tale world, where there are picturesque scenes! According to my research, Switzerland has the city of Lucerne, a city surrounded by mountains with beautiful views, bridges, and historic structures. It's great, isn't it! Besides, Switzerland has lots of other beautiful sights to discover. Switzerland is a great place to visit if you want to experience a meaningful trip and relieve the stress of traveling.
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girl, I have dreamed of traveling and discovering
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places. In the future, when there is no financial pressure, I
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I will reward myself with a visit to Switzerland. It can
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that Switzerland is as
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beautiful
as a fairy-tale world, where there are picturesque scenes! According to my research, Switzerland has the city of
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Lucerne
, a city surrounded by mountains with
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beautiful
views, bridges, and historic structures. It's great, isn't it!
Besides
, Switzerland has lots of other
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beautiful
sights to discover. Switzerland is a great place to visit if you want to experience a meaningful trip and relieve the
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of traveling.
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IELTS letter a place you want to go in the future

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  American English
1 paragraphs
111 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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