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You are a college student in an English- speaking country. You are unhappy with your rented accommodation so you have to request college accommodation. Write a letter to your school. In you letter, you should Introduce yourself Say why you are unhappy with rented accommodation Say why you believe college accommodation is better for you

You are a college student in an English- speaking country. You are unhappy with your rented accommodation so you have to request college accommodation. Write a letter to your school. In you letter, you should Introduce yourself Say why you are unhappy with rented accommodation Say why you believe college accommodation is better for you V70O

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for college accommodation. My name is Mia Smith. I am a sophomore, currently studying international trade at the University of Auckland. Now I live in a rented house, which I am unhappy with, for the safety issues. Last Monday, when I got back home, I found the room was in a mess. Some burglar had stolen my laptop and ipad. And before that, my car’s side window was shattered twice. Fortunately I have student insurance, but even so, it is unacceptable for me to live here any longer. I, therefore, request that college accommodation should be provided. Only in the campus environment, can I feel at ease with study and live. Besides, I will have more time to play with my classmates if I live on campus. I hope you can approve my request. I look forward to receiving your response. Yours faithfully, Mia Smith

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for college accommodation.

My name is Mia Smith. I am a sophomore, currently
 studying international trade at the University of Auckland. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalive
live
 in a rented This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, which I am unhappy with, for the safety issues. Last Monday, when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 back home, I found the room was in a mess. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 burglar had stolen my laptop and Possible spelling mistake found.iPadpadIPAiPodIADIPAG
ipad
. And This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 that, my car’s side window was shattered
 twice. Fortunately
 I have student insurance, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 even This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, it is unacceptable for me to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalive
live
 here any longer.

I, therefore
, request that college accommodation should be provided
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
Only
 in the campus environment, can I feel at This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
ease
 with study and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalive
live
. Besides
, I will have more time to play with my classmates if I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalive
live
 on campus.

I hope you can approve my request. I look forward to receiving your response.

Yours faithfully
,

Mia Smith