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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. Dm96
Dear Mr. Smith, I am working in Abbott Laboratories Pakistan. I want to participate in the seminar which is organized by you in the next month. This seminar is related to my work and professional life. I am writing this letter that, how to be a part of this seminar. Furthermore, I really appreciate if you send me the details regarding the dates and address. Although where it will be held and the timings. Moreover, please let me know the total accommodation and seminar cost so, I can take further steps. As it will be great for me to join this program and gain some skills regarding my work. At the end of this letter, I want to thank you that, you have sent me the invition on email and giving me chance for this valuable journey. Looking forward to you. Your's Faithfully,
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am working in Abbott Laboratories Pakistan. I want to participate in the seminar which
is organized
by you in the
next
month. This seminar
is related
to my work and professional life. I am writing this letter that, how to be a part of this seminar.

Furthermore
, I
really
appreciate if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
regarding the dates and address. Although where it will
be held
and the timings.
Moreover
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know the total accommodation and seminar cost
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, I can take
further
steps. As it will be great for me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
this program and gain
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
regarding my work.

At the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of this letter, I want to thank you that, you have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
me the
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invition
on email and giving me chance for this valuable journey. Looking forward to you.

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IELTS letter You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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