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You recently went to concert and thought pne of the singers was very good.You want to tell how you feel. write a letter to the singer.In your letter: say how you feelabout his/her performance , give details of your music-related activities , explain how you would like him/her to help you with ypur music-related activities

You recently went to concert and thought pne of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feelabout his/her performance, give details of your music-related activities, explain how you would like him/her to help you with ypur music-related activities p2y3

Dear Richa, I hope you are doing good. I am writing this letter about your spectacular performance last night at stadium. I was on ninth cloud after watching your show because you were the best of all. I felt the pain in your voice and the music was next level. The way you played piano I can’t take my eyes of you. I am a student and I have a music band of 4 people. I use to give performances at my college whenever there is any party as well as at my home functions. Even you can check my music composition videos on you tube but I am still working on my singing skills. Now as you know that I am interested in singing, it would be very beneficial for my singing career if you help me in sharpen my voice and I would appreciate if you give me some lessons how to play piano. I will wait to hear from you. Have a nice day Your sincerely Navjot

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.RicheyRichRochaRich a
Richa
,

I hope you are doing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
. I am writing this letter about your spectacular performance last night at stadium.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 was on ninth cloud after watching your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 you were the best of all. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 felt the pain in your voice and the music was next
 level. The way you played piano I can’t take my eyes of you.

I am a student and I have a music band of 4 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. I Make sure that 'use to' is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean 'accustomed to', use "used to".used to
use to
 give performances at my college whenever there is any party as well
 as at my home functions. Even you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 my music composition videos on you tube This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I am still
 working on my singing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 as you know that I am interested
 in singing, it would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 beneficial for my singing career if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me in sharpen my voice and I would appreciate if you give me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 lessons how to play piano.

I will wait to hear from you. Have a nice Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphday.day!day?day:day,day;
day


Your sincerely


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Navjot

IELTS letter You recently went to concert and thought pne of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feelabout his/her performance, give details of your music-related activities, explain how you would like him/her to help you with ypur music-related activities

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

169 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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