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Dear Smith I have heard that you are organising an educational program for the the teachers in Vancouver Canada. As you know that I am working as a teacher it will be helpful for me perform better. Here I am writing to know no more about the program. I what to know the exact time for the program when it was held? what is the timming of program? Is any expert will be there? Is any accommodation will be provided by the organisation or arranged by the individuals. If we are arranging for the accommodation by ourself then let me know about some hotels and living places near that area. It will be easy for me to plan according that. I am looking forward for your response. Your's faithfully Jasveer Kaur

Dear Smith

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know
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 of program? Is any expert will be there?

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 or arranged by the individuals. If we are arranging for the accommodation by The term is non-standard and not widely accepted.ourselves
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 hotels and living places near that area. It will be easy for me to plan according that.

I am looking forward for your response.

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Your's
faithfully


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