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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear sir, I am writing this letter about the course, which i am not able to attend further classes because of my full time job, i joined this Course to learn Designing, Programming and basics of Computer measuring machine. As i have mentioned to you earlier that i am doing full time job as Quality Technician at BV Glazing LTD, Toronto. My Company has started new project in montreal and they decided to send me there for an inspection. New project is very important for my company as well as for me becuase there will be very learning opportunies which i want to explore but i will finished my work by end of July 2021. So, i am not able to continue this course for next 4 months but once i will get back in toronto i would like to start in august 2021. i hope you will be happy with deicison. yours sincerely, Mehul Panchal

Dear sir,

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because
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joined
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Company
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started
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montreal and
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send
 me there for an inspection.

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very
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important
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becuase
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but
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finished
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end
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start
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august
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yours
sincerely
,

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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

155 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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