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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.

Dear Mr George I am writing this to express my interest in working our company's US headquarter for the next few months to nourish my skills and add an international experience to my profile. I want to contribute to the growth of our company with new skills and carry out my responsibilities more efficiently. I have seen on the company's website that they are looking for an experienced project leader who can manage an international team. As you know I have been working at the same designation for last 2 years, I am willing to collaborate with international team. Moreover, the US office frequently arrange training session that would enhance my professional skills. I am highly positive that working in the head office will enhance my skills that would be beneficial to our company. I have already discussed that with Julia, she has agreed to take my responsibilities during my absence. Furthermore, I will be actively checking my emails and phone calls to respond to her queries. Once I will be back, I will do extra hours and try to catch up on everything I missed. I hope you will understand my concern. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely Rajni Panchal
Dear Mr George

I am writing this to express my interest in working our
company
's US headquarter for the
next
few months to nourish my
skills
and
add
an international experience to my profile. I want to contribute to the growth of our
company
with new
skills
and carry out my responsibilities more
efficiently
.

I have
seen
on the
company
's website that they are looking for an experienced project leader who can manage an international team. As you know I have been working at the same designation for last 2 years, I am willing to collaborate with international team.
Moreover
, the US office
frequently
arrange training session that would enhance my professional
skills
. I am
highly
positive
that working in the head office will enhance my
skills
that would be beneficial to our
company
.

I have already discussed that with Julia, she has
agreed
to take my responsibilities during my absence.
Furthermore
, I will be
actively
checking my emails and phone calls to respond to her queries. Once I will be back, I will do extra hours and try to catch up on everything I missed.

I hope you will understand my concern.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
Rajni
Panchal
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IELTS letter You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
205 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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