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Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays.

Dear Michael, I am writing because I got approval my holidays and, I am excited to visit you in Canada, I have been planning my vacations for long time ago so it is the perfect month for travel and take a rest from my job. I was searching a lot places for visit but I have in mind stay in three specific cities, the first place that I like to viewing is Toronto your city, I remember that you told me that is the flowers season, then Montreal I know that it is popular for the art galleries and magic streets with different colours and graffitied walls with amazing vibes. finally I will go to Quebec I really want to practice my French language, after all I learnt some words at the University hopefully I can have a conversation. Also I would like to know if you have any suggestion about more interesting things that we can do during the trip, what is the best way to start for sightseeing options? I can wait for see you soon and share a cup of wine in Canada. Kind regards, Sammy
Dear Michael, I am writing
because
I
got
approval my holidays and, I
am excited
to visit you in Canada, I have been planning my vacations for long time ago
so
it is the perfect month for travel and take a rest from my job. I was searching
a lot places
for visit
but
I have in mind stay in three specific cities, the
first
place that I like to viewing is Toronto your city, I remember that you
told
me
that is
the flowers season, then Montreal I know that it is popular for the art galleries and magic streets with
different
colours
and graffitied walls with amazing vibes.
finally
I will go to Quebec I
really
want to practice my French language,
after all
I
learnt
some
words at the University
hopefully
I can have a conversation.
Also
I would like to know if you have any suggestion about more interesting things that we can do during the trip, what is the best way to
start
for sightseeing options? I can wait for
see
you
soon
and share a cup of wine in Canada.

Kind regards, Sammy
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays.

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
188 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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