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you work for an international company and would like to send six months working in its head office in another country.write a letter to your manger. in your letter,1. Explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months, 2. say how your work could be done while you are away, 3. ask for his/her help in arranging it

you work for an international company and would like to send six months working in its head office in another country. write a letter to your manger. in your letter, 1. Explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months, 2. say how your work could be done while you are away, 3. ask for his/her help in arranging it rrdn
Dear Mr. Mohan, I am writing to you regarding that, I got a chance to work for a project in ABC international company's head-office for six months, which is one of our prestige's client. As our organization have listed a set of employee's to work for them, in which I got a chance to work for the client. However, our organization have signed a join venture with ABC organization. I have informed about my six month work-off in our team and hand over my work with our team-member Nisha. She agreed to take care of my work and I will be in contact with her if she need any help from me. As well as I will stay connected with team to guide them during the time of emergency. I assure you that my work will not be affected during my work-off. Due to the movement of my work to ABC organization, I request you to approve my work-off for our team for the period of six months. So that, I can confirm my travel to the ABC company. Thank you, ABI
Dear Mr.
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Mohan
, I am writing to you regarding that, I
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a chance to
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for a project in
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ABC
international
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company
's head-office for six months, which is one of our prestige's client. As our
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organization
have listed a set of employee's to
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work
for them, in which I
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got
a chance to
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work
for the client.
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, our
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organization
have signed a
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join
venture with
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ABC
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organization
. I have informed about my six month work-off in our team and hand over my
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work
with our team-member
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Nisha
. She
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agreed
to take care of my
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work
and I will be in contact with her if she need any
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help
from me.
As well
as I will stay connected with team to guide them during the time of emergency. I assure you that my
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work
will not be
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affected
during my work-off. Due to the movement of my
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work
to
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ABC
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organization
, I request you to approve my work-off for our team for the period of six months.
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So
that, I can confirm my travel to the
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ABC
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company
.

Thank you, ABI
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IELTS letter you work for an international company and would like to send six months working in its head office in another country. write a letter to your manger. in your letter, 1. Explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months, 2. say how your work could be done while you are away, 3. ask for his/her help in arranging it

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