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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses. 7eDX
Dear John, First, I would like to thank you for agreeing to look after my house and my pet while I am away this coming week. It was a great relief when you agreed to take up the responsibilities. I would like to thank you for that and remind of some of the chores to take care of. In case you need to contact me for any reason, you may reach me thru my mobile phone. I wrote my number on the sticky note that I left on the fridge. I will be staying at Osaka Hotel for the whole duration of my trip and the hotel's number is 888-000-000. In case I am not reachable, you may leave them a message. Just a few reminders, the dog should be fed twice a day, one in the morning and one at night. You will find the food is in the black cupboard in the kitchen. Also, please take him for a walk for around 30 minutes in the afternoon. I have another favor to ask. I am expecting to receive a package on Saturday. When it arrives, I would be really grateful if you can bring it to my parent's house. Finally, for security, please clear my mailbox every day and keep the outside lights on at night. I look forward to seeing you on my return. Warm wishes, JG
Dear John,

First
, I would like to thank you for agreeing to look after my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
and my pet while I am away this coming week. It was a great relief when you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agreed
to take up the responsibilities. I would like to thank you for that and remind of
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?
some of the
chores to take care of.

In case you need to contact me for any reason, you may reach me
The word 'thru' is informal. Consider replacing it with "through".
thru
my mobile phone. I wrote my number on the sticky note that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
on the fridge. I will be staying at Osaka Hotel for the whole duration of my trip and the hotel's number is 888-000-000. In case I am not reachable, you may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
them a message.

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Just
a few reminders, the dog should
be fed
twice a day, one in the morning and one at night. You will find the food is in the black cupboard in the kitchen.

Also
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
take him for a walk for around 30 minutes in the afternoon.

I have another favor to ask. I am expecting to receive a package on Saturday. When it arrives, I would be
really
grateful if you can bring it to my parent's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

Finally
, for security,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
my mailbox every day and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
the outside lights on at night.

I look forward to seeing you on my return.

Warm wishes,

JG
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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  American English
10 paragraphs
229 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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