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You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course. bdp6
Dear Alexandra I have heard about the next Siggraph International Congress 2021. It will be 15 until 25 of November in Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada. It is the biggest convention event that meets all the best Graphic Computation, Art, Digital Design and Emerging Technologies, such as VR/AR. Every year they have a great exhibition with all the latest launches, involving virtual experiences, immersive environments, augmented reality devices, as well as some costumes concepts related to the Hollywood films. I believe It will be a relevant opportunity to our Company to send a group made by designers, engineers, and film-makers. Once we have all these subjects met in one place together, It will be useful to do an update in some tech trends and to do network. For knowledge sharing, they also offer some hands-on workshops. For this opportunity, It is important to consider the schedule about the projects in the week event, since it will take ten following days. Having it mind, I suggest to choose some people that won't impact on our delivery for this time. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards Alice Santos
Dear Alexandra

I have heard about the
next
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International Congress 2021. It will be 15 until 25 of November in Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada. It is the biggest convention
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event
that meets all the best Graphic Computation, Art, Digital Design and Emerging Technologies, such as VR/AR. Every year they have a great exhibition with all the latest launches, involving virtual experiences, immersive environments, augmented reality devices,
as well
as
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some
costumes concepts related to the Hollywood films.

I believe It will be a relevant opportunity to our
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Company
to
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send
a group made by designers, engineers, and film-makers. Once we have all these subjects met in one place together, It will be useful to do an update in
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some
tech trends and to do network. For knowledge sharing, they
also
offer
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some
hands-on workshops.

For this opportunity, It is
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important
to consider the schedule about the projects in the week
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event
, since it will take ten following days. Having it mind, I
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suggest to choose
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some
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people
that won't impact on our delivery for this time.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Best regards

Alice Santos
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IELTS letter You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

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6.0
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