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Write an email of application for the following job: • say why you are interested in the job • say what skills you have • ask about accommodation • ask about pay.

Write an email of application for the following job: • say why you are interested in the job • say what skills you have • ask about accommodation • ask about pay. wOgGl
Dear Mr. Green, I saw your advertisement on the Internet and would like to apply for the job. First of all, I am interested in this job because I consider myself a most suitable applicant for the job. I have a pleasant pesonality and this position would give me th opportunity to make the most of my interpersonal siklls, creativity and innovate ideas. I have good organizing skills and a good sense of humor. I like working in a team, but I can handle problems individually. As I currently work as a teacher, I have relevant experience in communicating with children. Last but not least, I have some question. Can you provide accommodation? Since the payment was not included in the advertisement, the information is also important to me. How much is the salary? I enclose a copy of my curriculum vitae outlining my qualifications and experience. I hope you will consider my application.
Dear Mr. Green,

I
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saw
your advertisement on the Internet and would like to apply for the job.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, I
am interested
in this job
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because
I consider myself a most suitable applicant for the job. I have a pleasant
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pesonality
and this position would give me
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th
opportunity to
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make
the most of my interpersonal
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siklls
, creativity and innovate
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ideas
.

I have
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good
organizing
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skills
and a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
sense of humor.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
like working in a team,
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but
I can handle problems
individually
. As I
currently
work as a teacher, I have relevant experience in communicating with children.

Last
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but
not least, I have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
question. Can you provide accommodation? Since the payment was not included in the advertisement, the information is
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to me. How much is the salary?

I enclose a copy of my curriculum vitae outlining my qualifications and experience. I hope you will consider my application.
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IELTS letter Write an email of application for the following job: • say why you are interested in the job • say what skills you have • ask about accommodation • ask about pay.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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