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You were searching on the internet for a used car, and found one that looks like it is in good condition. The seller has posted a photo of the car, but has not provided any other details. Write an email of about 150–200 words to the seller. Your email should do the following things: 1. Tell the seller how you found out about the car. 2. Ask about some specific details about the car. 3. Explain how much you are willing to pay for the car. 4. Request that the seller meet you so that you can test drive the car.

You were searching on the internet for a used car, and found one that looks like it is in good condition. The seller has posted a photo of the car, but has not provided any other details. Write an email of about 150–200 words to the seller. Your email should do the following things: 1. Tell the seller how you found out about the car. 2. Ask about some specific details about the car. 3. Explain how much you are willing to pay for the car. 4. Request that the seller meet you so that you can test drive the car. kJ32
Dear Sir/Madam, While surfing internet for used car, i found your car online which was posted three days ago. I hope it is still available because i really liked your car. Actually, you posted two pictures of your car but i did not found any other information so i thought that I will ask you directly. Could you please share information regarding car that how old it is? Does it include insurance for this year? By looking at two picture I think the condition is tip-top but it would be great if i can take test drive just to look at speed and control. Although, i like this car very much due to some situation i can not pay much, i can only give you 10, 000$. If condition is very good i can slightly adjust the payment. It would be great if we can meet and talk about the car so that you can give me best offer as well as i can drive your car. Sincerely, Urja
Dear Sir/Madam,

While surfing internet for
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share information regarding
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and talk about the
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can drive your car.

Sincerely
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IELTS letter You were searching on the internet for a used car, and found one that looks like it is in good condition. The seller has posted a photo of the car, but has not provided any other details. Write an email of about 150–200 words to the seller. Your email should do the following things: 1. Tell the seller how you found out about the car. 2. Ask about some specific details about the car. 3. Explain how much you are willing to pay for the car. 4. Request that the seller meet you so that you can test drive the car.

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  • You were searching on the internet for a used car, and found one that looks like it is in good condition. The seller has posted a photo of the car, but has not provided any other details. Write an email of about 150–200 words to the seller. Your email should do the following things: 1. Tell the seller how you found out about the car. 2. Ask about some specific details about the car. 3. Explain how much you are willing to pay for the car. 4. Request that the seller meet you so that you can test drive the car.