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You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take WWMN
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to let you know that I will not be able to continue my data science study. Recently, I have been assigned to a new project which requires me to travel and work overtime to kick-off the project. In addition, I have been asked to move to another country for a year to set up the team and execute the new project demand from there. I am travelling on 20th March 2021 which means 20th March 2021 will be my last offline class of the year. I would like to continue my learning, for which I would need your support to move my enrollment from face-to-face classes to more of online sessions. Online education will give me flexibility to learn whenever I have a free slot. Fortunately, I have your email address and would like to share outcomes of the exercise for your feedback. Please consider my request as an exception and hope to hear back from you. Yours faithfully, XYZ
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to
let
you know that I will not be able to continue my data science study. Recently, I have
been assigned
to a new project which requires me to travel and work overtime to kick-off the project.

In addition
, I have
been asked
to
move
to another country for a year to set up the team and execute the new project demand from there. I am travelling on 20th March 2021 which means 20th March 2021 will be my last offline
class
of the year.

I would like to continue my learning, for which I would need your support to
move
my enrollment from face-to-face classes to more of online sessions. Online education will give me flexibility to learn whenever I have a free slot.
Fortunately
, I have your email address and would like to share outcomes of the exercise for your feedback.

Please
consider my request as an exception and hope to hear back from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

XYZ
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IELTS letter You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
164 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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