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You went to another city for a training course and stayed at a friend's house for a week. They have been great hosts. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, thank them for having you at their house for a week express your gratitude for their hospitality say how much you miss them Write at least 150 words.

You went to another city for a training course and stayed at a friend's house for a week. They have been great hosts. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, thank them for having you at their house for a week express your gratitude for their hospitality say how much you miss them E80x
Dear Mike, Hope you are well, I am writing this letter to convey my gratitude towards you and your family for offering an excellent accommodation and hospitality for me for the entire week when I stayed in your home. Mike, I was really worried, when I reached a different city for a training course, but you and your family had really made me comfortable with the love and affection for a week. A special regards to your mom for treating me as one of her son, because of that I never missed my home during those days. Beside, I become a fan of your mom's cooking. I really miss your and your family, especially mom's food, the Morning tea for my refreshment that really helps me to concentrate on my course, which is my purpose of my visit. I will definitely visit your home during this holiday. Do give my regards to your family, Best regards,
Dear Mike,

Hope you are well, I am writing this letter to convey my gratitude towards you and your family for offering an excellent accommodation and hospitality for me for the entire week when I stayed in your home.

Mike, I was
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of that I never missed my home during those days. Beside, I become a fan of your mom's cooking.

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miss your and your family,
especially
mom's food, the Morning tea for my refreshment that
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really
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helps
me to concentrate on my course, which is my purpose of my visit. I will definitely visit your home during this holiday.

Do give my regards to your family,

Best regards,
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IELTS letter You went to another city for a training course and stayed at a friend's house for a week. They have been great hosts. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, thank them for having you at their house for a week express your gratitude for their hospitality say how much you miss them

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  American English
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156 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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