Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the mistake that I found while reading an article in your esteemed magazine. I have been a reader of your magazine for three years. In the latest edition of it, you have written an article on my area-chamba. I would like to draw your attention to some incorrect information which was given in your article.
it was wriiten in the article that chamba area will have snowfall in the last days of april. but actually in the last days of april there is little rain resulting no snow fall. The information mentioned in the article may mislead the toursits to make their palns to visit chamba in the last days of april to look and enjoy the snowfall, but their expectations will not be fulfiled as there will be no snowfall in the last days of april instead it will fall in the month of june. secondly, you have written that there are ample of means to transport to higher peak of chamba. but in reality fewer means of transport available in the peak season for tourists.
Many person who wants to explore the valleys of chamba are following your magazine. such kind of misinformation can mislead them. while mentioning any thingd in your article do some reserach and provide only that information which is genuine and correct. so that no tourists feels deceived and missed the scenary the wished to see.
I hope you will admire my suggestion and work on it.
yours faithfully,
WISDOM
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the mistake that I found while reading an
article
in your esteemed magazine. I have been a reader of your magazine for three years. In the latest edition of it, you have written an
article
on my
area-chamba
. I would like to draw your attention to
some
incorrect information which was
given
in your article.
it
was
wriiten
in the
article
that
chamba
area will have snowfall in the last days of
april
.
but
actually in the last days of
april
there is
little
rain resulting no snow fall. The information mentioned in the
article
may mislead the
toursits
to
make
their
palns
to visit
chamba
in the last days of
april
to look and enjoy the snowfall,
but
their expectations will not be
fulfiled
as there will be no snowfall in the last days of
april
instead
it will fall in the month of
june
.
secondly
, you have written that there are ample of means to transport to higher peak of
chamba
.
but
in reality fewer means of transport available in the peak season for tourists.
Many person
who wants to explore the valleys of
chamba
are following your magazine.
such
kind of misinformation can mislead them.
while
mentioning any
thingd
in your
article
do
some
reserach
and provide
only
that information which is genuine and correct.
so
that no tourists feels deceived and missed the
scenary
the wished to
see
.
I hope you will admire my suggestion and work on it.
yours
faithfully
,
WISDOM