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You want to learn another foreign language you shold write a request letter

You want to learn another foreign language you shold write a request letter xgAR9
I am writing to enquire about tajing French lessons with you. I saw the advert about you on the internet and I believe that you are just the person I am looking for. I am absolutely keen on learning the language from native speaker live yourself so I hope that you have space in your timetable to fit me in for some lessons. My reason for wanting to learn your language is becouse I am going to travel to Paris for a month next year to see some sightseengs of France and learn their tradition and customs. I really want to talk with natives and be able to understand French freely. I would be grateful if you could let me know what availability you have for lessons. Three times a week would be ideal if that is possible. I work at school and it would be fine if it is in the afternoon. Please, could you also tell me what you charge for tuition and how long each lesson would last? I look forward to hearing from you soon. Kind regards. Hilola Fayziyeva
I am writing to
enquire
about
tajing
French
lessons
with you. I
saw
the advert about you on the internet and I believe that you are
just
the person I am looking for.
I
am
absolutely
keen on learning the language from native speaker
live
yourself
so
I hope that you have space in your timetable to fit me in for
some
lessons
. My reason for wanting to learn your language is
becouse
I am going to travel to Paris for a month
next
year to
see
some
sightseengs
of France and learn their tradition and customs. I
really
want to talk with natives and be able to understand French
freely
. I would be grateful if you could
let
me know what availability you have for
lessons
. Three times a week would be ideal if
that is
possible. I work at school and it would be fine if it is in the afternoon.
Please
, could you
also
tell
me what you charge for tuition and how long each
lesson
would last? I look forward to hearing from you
soon
. Kind regards.
Hilola
Fayziyeva
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IELTS letter You want to learn another foreign language you shold write a request letter

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
182 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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