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You want to learn another foreign language you shold write a request letter

You want to learn another foreign language you shold write a request letter xgAR9

I am writing to enquire about tajing French lessons with you. I saw the advert about you on the internet and I believe that you are just the person I am looking for. I am absolutely keen on learning the language from native speaker live yourself so I hope that you have space in your timetable to fit me in for some lessons. My reason for wanting to learn your language is becouse I am going to travel to Paris for a month next year to see some sightseengs of France and learn their tradition and customs. I really want to talk with natives and be able to understand French freely. I would be grateful if you could let me know what availability you have for lessons. Three times a week would be ideal if that is possible. I work at school and it would be fine if it is in the afternoon. Please, could you also tell me what you charge for tuition and how long each lesson would last? I look forward to hearing from you soon. Kind regards. Hilola Fayziyeva

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