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Formal letter to give information about something.

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June 14, 2002 Marisa Hogan 277 Columbus Ave. New York, NY 10024 Dear Ms. Hogan, I have prepared an action research study that may be used for publication in the next five years. My study focuses on the impact of technology in the classroom. The audience for the study is teachers and teacher educators. We would appreciate your permission to include the following quotes, journal entries and writing samples by your daughter, Kate Hogan, in any published material that includes this work and in all languages and in all media and excerpts of the material, including use for advertising, publicity, and promotional purposes. In the study, I will include four journal entries describing Kate’s experiences with Writer’s Workshop, two poems Kate wrote, and three quotes from an interview I had with Kate. I have also included a copy of these passages within my study with this form. The student’s name will appear as Student 2 in the study instead of Kate Hogan. Two copies of this request are enclosed. Please sign both copies and return one to me, keeping the other one for your files. Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely, Polly Lagana 285 Broadway New York, NY 10013
June 14,
2002


Marisa Hogan

277 Columbus Ave.

New York, NY 10024

Dear Ms. Hogan,

I have prepared an action research
study
that may be
used
for publication in the
next
five years. My
study
focuses on the impact of technology in the classroom. The audience for the
study
is teachers and teacher educators. We would appreciate your permission to include the following quotes, journal entries and writing samples by your daughter, Kate Hogan, in any published material that includes this work and in all languages and in all media and excerpts of the material, including
use
for advertising, publicity, and promotional purposes.

In the
study
, I will include four journal entries describing Kate’s experiences with Writer’s Workshop, two poems Kate wrote, and three quotes from an interview I had with Kate. I have
also
included a copy of these passages within my
study
with this form.

The student’s name will appear as Student 2 in the
study
instead
of Kate Hogan.

Two copies of this request
are enclosed
.
Please
sign
both copies and return one to me, keeping the other one for your files.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely
,

Polly
Lagana


285 Broadway

New York, NY 10013
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IELTS letter Formal letter to give information about something.

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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