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Letter to friend to return wallet

Letter to friend to return wallet GwqVx

Dear Ian, How are you? I truly have to thank you for the fun holiday that we just had. I really needed it after the grueling round of examinations. The campfire was the highlight of the holiday – I don’t remember the last time I had so much fun laughing – You son is adorable! He is such a pro at charades. I guess he gets that from you. With all this holiday excitement, I left my wallet at your place. I suppose I left it your desk. As much as I’d love to drop by and collect it, I’m stuck with a rigid routine. It would be helpful if you could drop it off at the university on your way to work. I suppose the university is a slight detour from your usual route to work, but I hope you don’t really mind the one-kilometer deviation. Owe you plenty for that memorable holiday and thank you for understanding! Warm wishes,

Dear Ian,

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 and thank you for understanding!

Warm wishes, 