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Letter to friend to return wallet

Letter to friend to return wallet GwqVx
Dear Ian, How are you? I truly have to thank you for the fun holiday that we just had. I really needed it after the grueling round of examinations. The campfire was the highlight of the holiday – I don’t remember the last time I had so much fun laughing – You son is adorable! He is such a pro at charades. I guess he gets that from you. With all this holiday excitement, I left my wallet at your place. I suppose I left it your desk. As much as I’d love to drop by and collect it, I’m stuck with a rigid routine. It would be helpful if you could drop it off at the university on your way to work. I suppose the university is a slight detour from your usual route to work, but I hope you don’t really mind the one-kilometer deviation. Owe you plenty for that memorable holiday and thank you for understanding! Warm wishes,
Dear Ian,

How are you? I
truly
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have to
thank you for the fun
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holiday
that we
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just
had. I
really
needed it after the grueling round of examinations. The campfire was the highlight of the
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holiday
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
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I don’t remember the last time I had
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so
much fun laughing
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Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'You'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
You son
is adorable! He is such a pro at charades. I guess he
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gets
that from you. With all this
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holiday
excitement, I
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left
my wallet at your place. I suppose I
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left
it your desk. As much as I’d
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love
to drop by and collect it, I’m stuck with a rigid routine.

It would be helpful if you could drop it off at the university on your way to work. I suppose the university is a slight detour from your usual route to work,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I hope you don’t
really
mind the one-kilometer deviation.

Owe you
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plenty
for that memorable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
holiday
and thank you for understanding!

Warm wishes,

IELTS letter Letter to friend to return wallet

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
161 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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