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You ere working for a company.You have ssen some information about online course that would be useful for your company.gve details of course.say how the course would be useful.explane how the company could help you.

You ere working for a company. You have ssen some information about online course that would be useful for your company. gve details of course. say how the course would be useful. explane how the company could help you. Y2QLQ
Dear Sir, I am Ketrin Kety, currently working as a translator in your Touristic Agancy. I have learned about training course through the internet called International Tourism and I am writing to ask your support to participatung in this course. It is offered by Globe Trade Association and continues for a month that starts on Friday 16April. I think it would be beneficial for our company as we considering how to attract more people and offer services which travellers will enjoy. After examining feedbacks of participators I believe it wil provide me with an opportunity to become skilfull master and make a palatable to our company. My working timetable seems hectic. However, it would be better if company help me to attend the course and pay the cost of it. Your reply my queries will highly be appreciated. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully.
Dear Sir, I am
Ketrin
Kety
,
currently
working as a translator in your Touristic
Agancy
. I have learned about training course through the internet called International
Tourism and
I am writing to ask your support to
participatung
in this course. It
is offered
by Globe Trade Association and continues for a month that
starts
on Friday 16April. I
think
it would be beneficial for our
company
as
we considering
how to attract more
people
and offer services which
travellers
will enjoy. After examining feedbacks of participators I believe it
wil
provide me with an opportunity to become
skilfull
master and
make
a palatable to our
company
. My working timetable seems hectic.
However
, it would be better if
company
help
me to attend the course and pay the cost of it. Your reply my queries will
highly
be appreciated
. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours
faithfully
.
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IELTS letter You ere working for a company. You have ssen some information about online course that would be useful for your company. gve details of course. say how the course would be useful. explane how the company could help you.

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  American English
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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