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A series of radio programmes which you enjoyed finished recently. Write a letter to the radio station. Thank them for the series and tell them why you enjoyed it. Ask if they are going to broadcast similar programmes in the future.

A series of radio programmes which you enjoyed finished recently. Write a letter to the radio station. Thank them for the series and tell them why you enjoyed it. Ask if they are going to broadcast similar programmes in the future. lWAQb
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this to thank you for your fabulous programme "astonishing cutting-edge technologies". The entire series were very well thought through and it was abvious that there are a lot of efforts and research have been put behind it. The subjects were maticulously chosen to address the needs of the public as well as the professionals like us. Although the programme was aired during working hours, my collegues and I would ensure that we do not set any meeting during that time, so we can listen to it while doing work. Since we are working in a tech company, we have learnt a lot about the recent changes in technology, which could be immensly usefull in our projects as it gave us plenty of ideas. We would like very much to know if you are planning to air any similar programmes in the future. If yes, please do let us know in advance, so we will not miss any episod. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this to thank you for your fabulous
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astonishing cutting-edge technologies
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.

The entire series were
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very
well
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thought
through and it was
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abvious
that there are
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a lot of
efforts and research have
been put
behind it. The subjects were
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maticulously
chosen to address the needs of the public
as well
as the professionals like us.

Although the
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programme
was aired
during working hours, my
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collegues
and I would ensure that we do not set any meeting during that time,
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so
we can listen to it while doing work. Since we are working in a tech
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company
, we have
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learnt
a lot about the recent
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changes
in technology, which could be
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immensly
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usefull
in our projects as it gave us
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plenty
of
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ideas
.

We would like
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very
much to know if you are planning to air any similar
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programmes
in the future. If yes,
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please
do
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let
us know in advance,
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so
we will not miss any
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episod
.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter A series of radio programmes which you enjoyed finished recently. Write a letter to the radio station. Thank them for the series and tell them why you enjoyed it. Ask if they are going to broadcast similar programmes in the future.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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