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You want to go to Winston University to do a degree in History.Write a letter applying for a place on a course.

You want to go to Winston University to do a degree in History. Write a letter applying for a place on a course. OEkjG

Dear Sir/Madam I would like to apply for a place on the History course which supervenes this August at Winston University. I am 24 years old and I have completed a Bachelor's degree Archival at Point Park University, where I received first class honours. Before that I was a pupil at Berkely Comprehensive, where I hold 5 GCSEs and 2 A levels in History. I have spent two years working as assistant archivist since the completion my BA. During this time I have gained lots of experience in archiving, which was extremely quaint and exciting for me. Besides, I have perceived many secrets of this work. I am presently intend to specialise by gaining further qualifications before launching on my choosen career in this field. I enclose further details of my education and qualification to date. I hope that you will consider me for entry

Dear Sir/Madam

I would like to apply for a place on the History course which supervenes this August at Winston University.

I am 24 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and I have completed a Bachelor's degree Archival at Point Park University, where I received first
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
Possible spelling mistake. 'honours' is British English.honors
honours
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
 that I was a pupil at Possible spelling mistake found.BerkeleyBerkley
Berkely
 Comprehensive, where I hold 5 Possible spelling mistake found.GasesGCS EsGCSE
GCSEs
 and 2 This word is normally spelled with hyphen.A-levels
A levels
 in History.

I have spent two years working as assistant archivist since the completion my BA. During this time I have gained lots of experience in archiving, which was extremely
 quaint and exciting for me. Besides
, I have perceived This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 secrets of this work. I am presently
Consider using a past participle here: "intended".intended
intend
 to Possible spelling mistake. 'specialise' is British English.specialize
specialise
 by gaining further
 qualifications This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 launching on my Possible spelling mistake found.choosechosenchooseschooserchoose n
choosen
 career in this field.

I enclose further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 of my education and qualification to date. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope that you will consider me for Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphentry.entry!entry?entry:entry,entry;
entry