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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.

You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. ax8o
Dear Mr Robson, I am writing to you with regard to a recent visit I made to your restaurant along with my parents and how disappointed I was with the quality of the food. I have been a regular patron of your eatery ever since it first opened its doors for customers and have always enjoyed the wonderful delicacies offered. On numerous occasions, I have recommended your restaurant to family and friends as I believe it to be one of the finest in the city. I was therefore, utterly shocked and disappointed with the food that was served to us yesterday while i was dining with my family. The quality was simply not up to the mark. The entree was cold, the main course was undercooked and even the dessert was nothing to write home about. It was a rather embarrassing situation for me since I was the one who insisted we dine at your restaurant. I would urge you to look into this matter and attempt to find out why the quality of food has deteriorated and take corrective measures immediately, otherwise, you might lose one of your most loyal customers. I look forward to a prompt response Yours sincerely, Sheeba Hasan
Dear Mr Robson, I am writing to you with regard to a recent visit I made to your restaurant along with my parents and how disappointed I was with the quality of the food. I have been a regular patron of your eatery ever since it
first
opened its doors for customers and have always enjoyed the wonderful delicacies offered. On numerous occasions, I have recommended your restaurant to family and friends as I believe it to be one of the finest in the city. I was
therefore
,
utterly
shocked and disappointed with the food that
was served
to us yesterday while
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was dining with my family. The quality was
simply
not up to the mark. The
'entree' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "entrée"
entree
was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
, the main course was
Possible spelling mistake found.
undercooked
and even the dessert was nothing to write home about. It was a
rather
embarrassing situation for me since I was the one who insisted we dine at your restaurant. I would urge you to look into this matter and attempt to find out why the quality of food has deteriorated and take corrective measures immediately,
otherwise
, you might lose one of your most loyal customers. I look forward to a prompt response Yours
sincerely
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Sheeba
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Hasan

IELTS letter You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.

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  American English
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