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Write a letter to your friend to inform him you would not be able to join him over the holidays

Write a letter to your friend to inform him you would not be able to join him over the holidays LNq6
Dear Rakesh, I am writing in connection with your invitation. Unfortunately, I won't be able to join you on the mentioned dates in the letter because of my work commitment. Let me give you more details on the aforementioned issue. I am working on an application that is scheduled to get deployed next month. The team is working very hard to make sure we can meet the deadline Since I am heading the team it would be extremely irresponsible of me to apply for leave during that time. Let me explain the situation in detail. I am heading the team that is working on front-end application development for my company. We are expected to deploy the new application by the end of November for which the team is working extremely hard. It would be irresponsible of me to apply for leave during that time. I was wondering if it is possible to reschedule the holiday plan. Please let me know of your availability over the summers, I and my wife would enjoy spending our summer with you and Linda. Please let me know. Yours faithfully, Karm Veer I
Dear Rakesh,

I am writing in connection with your invitation. Unfortunately, I won't be able to
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next
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very
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sure we can
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it would be
extremely
irresponsible of me to apply for
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leave
during that time.

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me
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explain
the situation in detail. I am heading the
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team
that is
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on front-
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application development for my
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company
. We are
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expected
to deploy the new application by the
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end
of November for which the
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team
is
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working
extremely
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hard
. It would be irresponsible of me to apply for
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leave
during that time.

I was wondering if it is possible to reschedule the holiday plan.
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Please
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let
me know of your availability over the summers, I and my wife would enjoy spending our summer with you and Linda.

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Please
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let
me know.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Karm
Veer

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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend to inform him you would not be able to join him over the holidays

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9 paragraphs
187 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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