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You took part in a school event. Write a letter to your friend in which you tell him/her:

You took part in a school event. Write a letter to your friend in which you tell him/her: AaR21

Dear Sabina, How is everything going? ? I hope this letter will find you in good health and in high spirits. Sorry I haven't been in touch such a long time. As you know, I've always been very interested in different sports. That's why I was busy with preparation to the annual sport competition last month. It was held in January at my school and called Spartakiada - 2022. There were many competitions there, including volleyball, tennis, chess, draughts, arm wrestling and football. Actually the annual sports day at my school takes place with full preparations. They begun a month earlier so that students could perfect their act. We got extra time to practice for the sports day. It also helped to cut down on some academic studying which everyone enjoyed. I also have been hardly training for the event all month. Besides all teams had to paint coloured posters and think up a team motto. Frankly speaking, I was extremely excited about the opportunity to have a full month of sports activities. The sports day started at 10: 00 a. m. with a memorable and colourful ceremony. I played tennis and chess. My team won a silver cup. On the final day, we all invited our parents and teachers. There were many other people invited. There was a chief guest who inaugurated and concluded the ceremony with encouraging words. The photographer was also present. Thus, we all had a lot of fun on our sports day. That's all for now. By the way, what did you do last month? Please write me back as soon as possible and let me know how you are. Best wishes, Tori

Dear Sabina,

How is everything going? ? I hope this letter will find you in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 health and in high spirits. Sorry I haven't been in touch such a long time.

As you know, I've always been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 interested in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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sports
. That's why I was busy with preparation to the annual You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sport
 competition last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
. It was held
 in January at my school and called Possible spelling mistake found.
Spartakiada
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-
 2022. There were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 competitions there, including volleyball, tennis, chess, Possible spelling mistake. 'draughts' is British English.drafts
draughts
, arm wrestling and football.

Actually the annual You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 day at my school takes place with full preparations. They Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean "began"?began
begun
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
 earlier This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that students could perfect their act. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 extra time to practice for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 day. It also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down on This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 academic studying which everyone enjoyed. I also
 have been hardly training for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
. Besides
 all teams had to paint Possible spelling mistake. 'coloured' is British English.colored
coloured
 posters and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 up a team motto.

Frankly
 speaking, I was extremely
 excited about the opportunity to have a full You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 activities.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 day This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 at 10: 00 a. m. with a memorable and Possible spelling mistake. 'colourful' is British English.colorful
colourful
 ceremony. I played tennis and chess. My team won a silver cup. On the final day, we all invited our parents and teachers. There were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 invited. There was a chief guest who inaugurated and concluded the ceremony with encouraging words. The photographer was also
 present. Thus
, we all had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 fun on our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 day.

That's all for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. By the way, what did you do last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
? This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 write me back as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know how you are.

Best wishes,

Tori