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you have had a problem with one of your friends. you have not been able to speak to your friend about this. write a letter to him or her.

you have had a problem with one of your friends. you have not been able to speak to your friend about this. write a letter to him or her. 7p8Xn
Dear Loan, I am writing this letter to let you know that on my friend's birthday, I left midway through and have not been able to tell you why. Not that I'm trying to excuse myself, it's been really hard to sit down and write since the last time we saw each other that day. On your birthday, after I heard that my parents decided to take me abroad to study abroad to better cultivate myself and I couldn't accept this but in the end, I had to Go to please your parents. When I arrived in Japan, I had to change accommodation continuously because I could not accept such an environment. I sometimes have to look for work on my own to cover my living and educational expenses. Despite my parents' financial help, that sum is just adequate to cover my living expenses here. I've calmed down a little bit now, and hopefully, we'll see each other again soon. I'm hoping to hear from you shortly. Anyway, tell me everything that's going on in your life, and I swear I won't do it again! Lots of love, Trang
Dear Loan,

I am writing this letter to
let
you know that on my friend's birthday, I
left
midway through and have not been able to
tell
you why. Not that I'm trying to excuse myself, it's been
really
hard
to sit down and write since the last time we
saw
each other that day.

On your birthday, after I heard that my parents decided to take me abroad to study abroad to better cultivate myself and I couldn't accept this
but
in the
end
, I had to Go to
please
your parents. When I arrived in Japan, I had to
change
accommodation
continuously
because
I could not accept such an environment. I
sometimes
have to
look for work on my
own
to cover my living and educational expenses. Despite my parents' financial
help
, that sum is
just
adequate to cover my living expenses here. I've calmed down a
little bit
now
, and
hopefully
, we'll
see
each other again
soon
. I'm hoping to hear from you shortly.

Anyway,
tell
me everything that's going on in your life, and I swear I won't do it again!

Lots of
love
,

Trang
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IELTS letter you have had a problem with one of your friends. you have not been able to speak to your friend about this. write a letter to him or her.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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